The Lonely Prince
A long time ago there lived a lonely Prince. He had a beautiful kingdom but no friends to play with. He sent his men to find the wisest in his land so that he doesn’t have to be lonely any more. The wisest taught him ways of how to make friends and he was lonely no more.
Thinking of, how can make this story lively, be more attractive and interesting. i start to crack my head and think, what am i going to write in the start of the story, it's seems like fairly tale story, that the prince no friends to play, and do not know how to make friends.
maybe i try a little part... start a bit....
Once upon a time, in a land far, far away, there was a lonely Prince name PaniSuria. He is the only prince of the King Panihandsome and Queen PaniCatik, the kingdom of Paniharmoni land. Prince Panisuria was not happy, although he has given a personal wood car, there is a beautiful garden in the kingdom, and unlimited playroom with thousand of toys. The Prince Panisuria would often stand on the castle ramparts and look down at the young people playing in the square and sigh. He wish to play and make himself joint together with them.
people in the land do not knew why Prince Panisuria was lonely, as he lived in a big castle with all his family and servants, and there was always someone wherever he went. But no matter how many people were with him, the Prince still always felt lonely.
The King Panihandsome and QueenPaniCantik is busy looking after the people of the land. They are always going out doing work and visiting the poor people, helping them. and they do not aware of the Prince PaniSuria conditions, that he is not happy, and feeling lonely. The Prince PaniSuria was moody and moody when times oes by...
the servant, the loyalty Hitam Manis, the always follower of the Prince PaniSuria tell him that in the land there is a wiset man whi lives in this ParniHarmoni land.
The Prince Panisuria decided to sent his servants to go reach for the wiset man, and teach him how to be not lonely anymore.
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haiya.. really hard lah...
using the English to write a story... let my inner child to come out and let go....
but, i don't have any idea... HOW to do...
after work, i phone up my immediate boss, she is my friends and also a very helpful senior for me in my workplace. i can tell: she is very helpful boss, humour, not calculative, god listener... in words...she is good lah...
PJ Lau, asked me to go her house to take the storry book. i even borrow the puppet from office. this round i go her house to borrow her personal story book as she told me there is plenty of story book at her house.
oh...
maybe after do more reading, i will find some idea how to so so??
anxiety now... arisen....
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headache...
Alex... this round, i really feel like want to "surrender" and "quit" from this story game... hahaha it's harder than to do the "e-learning on elgg"... ...
ok... relax... x10, x10, relax.... still have time... don't panic, don't worry...
i guess, i will make myself funs, by listening to children song, read about the story book i borrow from pJ Lau, and start later.......
haiya~~
ALS members, please be patient ya...
i will try first ... then only post in my blog.
OK?
have to do more reading... get myself find some idea to "enrich" the story...
I Ling, I know you are no quitter, I do understand the frustration....try to approach the task as a 'child' not a 'adult' and start backwards by identifying the message you wish to convey through the story...then create the elements in the story that would carry the message e.g. through symbols, metaphors and flesh out the story with the techniques already covered e.g. adjectives etc. I thought you already make a good start...
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