maybe i can try to used this as frame, and help me to make a picture, then i will add the adjective, methphors or linking words that make the story lively.
Step 1 – The Setting:
Once upon a time, in a land far far away, there lived a Prince name PaniSuria. He was the only son of King Panihandsome and Queen PaniCantik. They stayed in the kingdom of Fericirea, the land of fortune, with the richest blessing of The TuhanKurnia and full by happiness. The Kingdom of Fericirea is surrounding by the seas, having the fruitful berry, wealthy of fishes and many kind of food to support the people.
Step 2 – The Problem is.....
And yet, in this beautiful Fericirea land, the Prince PaniSuria was unhappy, he was always singing a song along with him"Lonely i am so lonely, I have nobody,To call my owwnnnLonely I m so lonely, i m mr. Lonely, I have nobody, To call my owwnnn, I m so lonely"Although having everything in the castle, an enchanted rose garden, a tremendous comeliness playroom with thousand upon thousands' of toys, Prince PaniSuria cannot feel the happiness. The happy countenance would never appear but only the sadness.
Step 3 – The failure to solve the problem
People in Fericirea Kingdom were not aware that their lovely prince is always alone.
Prince Panisuria always mumbled: I am living in this big castle, but my papa and mama are too busy. I have no buddy to talk with and no people to play together! This, the bobololo Car, this, the sweetest Yammy Yammy cookies, and this sukisuka play ground are too empty with only me! Arhhh... I am so boring!!
Step 4 – Then a hero comes along....
The Prince Panisuria entourages, the loyalty Manis, Masam, Pahit, and Pedas told the Prince PaniSuria that there lived a legendary wiser in the Fericirea Kingdom, inside the deep woods at secrect forest called ParniHarmoni. Soon, the men of prince, Manis, Masam Pahit and Pedas travelled to the deep woods of ParniHarmoni secret forest to search for the legendary wiser, the PutihPutih and to invite him come to Fericirea kingdom to meet Prince PaniSuria.
Step 5 – And he has a plan.
The prince Panisuria told wiser about his loneliness and sadness. The wiser understood and said to him: "No worry, my little prince, i'll help you". Then, PutihPutih spell out his incantation: "GuluGuluWalaWalaBaliBaliBumb"!Immediately, PutihPutih and Prince Panisuria appeared in front of the Macalister Park. Then PutihPutih said to the Prince Panisuria: "Here my little prince, before you can make your friend, i shall give you these 7 magic words: Be confident to talk, Be polite, Be truthful, Be Selflessness, Be Respectful, Be Kindness, and always listen, then you will chase away the loneliness.
Step 6 – And the Solution is found!
The prince knew had walk his first step to make friends. When the prince Panisuria spelt the magic words, miracle happend, the children at the Macalister Park all came to him, talked to him, and they played together. He was lonely no more. He remembered the 7 magic words: Be confident to talk, Be polite, Be truthful, Be Selflessness, Be Respectful, Be Kindness, and always listen.
Step 7 – The Happy Ending
Since then, the happy face appeared and Prince PaniSuria was lonely no more. At his 10th Birthday, he received a lot of greetings from around the world. Can you remembered his magic words?
Well done!....now flesh it out and a focus on the message contain within the story.
ReplyDeletechanging it, and make some adjustment :)
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